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Katherine 'Kitty Kat' Williams ([info]kitty_fangs) wrote in [info]birthwritelab,
@ 2007-02-27 05:09:00


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Dances With Snakes
The 1900s

"'Snakes At Feet', huh...?"

Eyeing him, Katherine felt the weight of the weapon in her hand. North America's natives were never really in need of being 'tamed', but even now, with so many tribes having been pushed into reservations with the duel sympathiser of alcohol and liberal interpretation of legal terms, there were still a few who held true to the old ways. Traditions died hard and never more so among people in need of miracles.

Snakes At Feet was more at home with a gun than bow and arrow, but that did not preclude him from reasoning that sometimes darkness was best fought by its own kind. The old Medicine Man forbade the chosen method, of course, but hard times called for desperate measures and eventually relented.

Vampires... There were written records of them stretching as far back as the Indus River Valley civilisation and almost certainly beyond. America's true children were no stranger to them, either.

The act of summoning one, though... It could be done. Dangerous and foolhardy in the extreme, but it could be done.

"Didn't expect a white girl."

It was spoken with an amused sense of irony, not racism. Brow furrowed and then raising.

"Yeah, well..." Responded Katherine, deliberating. "I didn't exactly plan to go for a spell of 'tomahawks at dawn', either, y'know?"

An observation was muttered from the Medicine Man to Snakes At Feet. Not in English. Too elderly to start learning and too stubborn to see the need.

"What'd he say?"

"He said your shadow was called when your father died."

For a moment, the vampire halted movement with the miniature axe in hand. Jaw clenching at the memory of the day she died. The day her father had died. No, more than that. His murder. Retribution didn't so much come, as see a reason to find her.

Lucky retribution...

"Yeah," she solemnly replied, her grip around the handle tightening for just a moment. "My shadow... You could say that."

Dust in my shoes.

"You could say that, sure."

Dust in my shoes and no way home...

The killer blinked softly back up in the two men's direction. Recollections going through in thought, of a time so recently past. Although she had yet to test the principle, Katherine had now come to realise the entire world was her new home. There was nowhere the sun could shine forever. In so many ways, she truly had died that day. Already, the vampiress standing there was well on her way to becoming the Katherine of decades hence. All she needed was refining and that, too, would come soon.

"So... Who'd you want dead?"

"Dozen men, give or take. When they couldn't take no more horses, they went up and started... Taking some other things."

The phrase was not finished and for good enough reason. It didn't have to be. The imagination could be powerful as both enemy or ally, but Katherine cared little. She needed no justification. On the other hand, there was the undeniable feel that this might not be so different to the same task of vengeance she had put herself to, in pursuit of those who had wronged her so badly.

"Hey, Tom! Think this one'd be purty if she squealed?"
"Ehh... She's all torn up with them riddle-holes you shot 'er full of. Be like fuckin' a corpse. C'mon, leave 'er be... We got elsewheres t'get to."


Not exactly the most Christian of attitudes.

Guess who got to be closer to Jesus, assholes... That's right, you did. Easter-style.

Because on the whole, Katherine felt nailing what remained of those victims to a cross, in the tried-and-true method of crucifixion, would make for an inventive personal touch, considering her new undead nature. As she rode off, the vultures had already begun to circle.

Back to the present, though and the vampiress nodded to the two natives' request.

"I get entitled to whatever I find prettiest," came her only demand. "Just tell me where."

Later that night, the directed location became a slaughterhouse and the very tomahawk within her hand was found buried between the last man's shoulder blades. She had promised to release him if he begged nicely enough. She never said anything about not killing while he ran away.

Especially screaming like a girl.

Then again, considering her ad hoc attempt at castration immediately prior, it was more a wonder of how he even found the strength to try and move.

She made at least one of them confess to a rape they had carried out. Made that one fuck a dead porcupine. Then she made the few other survivors do likewise to him, too. Being in the position of meting out poetic justice, Katherine found, could be rather entertaining as a private enterprise. The future would bring with it even more ingenious ways of execution, but Katherine's ability to keep her fun alive was already quite experienced.

As an exercise in irony, she decapitated the entire gang and roped their heads together outside in a totem pole arrangement.

Snakes At Feet came to see the results of such butchery with an uneasy feeling of queasy revulsion. Thus was the agreement, however and he would cry no tears for these men. It was always better for devils to take their own, after all.

Las Vegas, Nevada, 2010

"Yeah, redhead. You seen her?"

Being informed that Grace was still employed was making Katherine start to wonder if she shouldn't make a start on her first Slayer meal of 2010 with the Richards girl. Had Deanna talked to her? Katherine had no idea, but time was running out and she was already being generous with her temperament.

Well, perhaps the green guy was right and this would degenerate into something larger than expected, but Katherine was fast approaching the 'fuck it' stage of preparation. If everybody just did what she told them to, the world would just be a whole lot easier... But no, nobody ever did. Everything could run smoothly, damn it and if people just realised that, things would be fine.

There was only so long a girl could wait before realising a few messages had to be spelt out in a more direct way.

Then again, perhaps making her mark on Las Vegas was almost precisely what was most required now. She had been none too pleased with Jill's recent telephone message and was now seriously considering paying the lawyer a visit, torturing her into a new level of understanding and then giving her fangs for the hell of it. Then maybe use her to find out who had caused all the carnage at Wolfram and Hart and join up with them.

Or maybe that Mallory girl would make good bait to draw Grace out into a crosshairs. Not average bullets, of course. There were certain concoctions of things to put inside them, when hunting for the undead.

Or perhaps this Blanchard character. A supposed Slayer who worked for the Doughnut Brigade - maybe she'd be worth looking up?

On the other hand... Katherine definitely knew one Slayer who might be useful in a situation like this. Recognising the fact, a slow, cool smirk of darkness began to widen itself over Katherine's features.

Rhiannon.

She would just have to find her, that was all. There was no mistaking just how neatly the solution worked out. Aside from the possible exception of Kris, who she hadn't seen in quite some time, Rhiannon was just about the only Slayer who Katherine could truly be said to have something akin to respect for. The girl wasn't just a professional, she was a veteran, through and through. There was a difference and the vampiress could see it in the younger brunette's eyes.

Until such a time, Katherine resolved to seeing if she could get a handle on the local girl in blue.

Who would have thought a couple of Slayers would provide the answer Katherine was looking for?

Snakes At Feet, the vampire mused, would have been proud...


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[info]clemencea
2007-03-02 14:33 (link)
I really enjoyed this entry. Very descriptive with the right touch of humor. It was interesting to see a contrast between two entirely different time periods, and how that character acted in both of them.

I can't find much to criticize in this. The structure and the mood were consistent throughout.

Snakes At Feet came to see the results of such butchery with an uneasy feeling of queasy revulsion.

The one minute detail I had trouble with was this sentence. It seems that 'uneasy' paired with 'revulsion' would be redundant together. Perhaps just "a feeling of quesy revulsion"?

All in all, an excellent piece.

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[info]emphasis
2007-03-02 14:50 (link)
Ah, thank you!

And constructive criticism is nice. Even if it's just to say what particularly stood out and stuff - unless other people have already reflected the feelings. :)

You do have a point! My logic, at the time, was that I felt that adding 'uneasy' would convey more of an impression of them finding it disturbing (like, standing on uneasy ground, as if feeling hte need to sit down), as all as simply horrific. Like, you could see someone's head cut off and it would be fairly unpleasant to take notice of, but if there's something, say, on the scale of what Hannibal Lector did, when he crucified that guard to the prison bars with their guts hanging out, it would be something over and above something which would just be disgusting to see.

Of course, that was just my interpretation! If it didn't work, than I can learn from that. :)

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[info]clemencea
2007-03-02 14:53 (link)
*nods* I understand what you mean.
Maybe something like "an extreme feeling of queasy revulsion" or something along those lines.
Although if a man such as he felt unease at the carnage, it must have been awful, because it seems he would be used to such things.

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[info]sinister_darian
2007-03-05 17:19 (link)
Snakes At Feet was more at home with a gun than bow and arrow, but that did not preclude him from reasoning that sometimes darkness was best fought by its own kind. [Consider separating into two sentences. That latter half is clunky.] The old Medicine Man forbade the chosen method, of course, but hard times called for desperate measures and eventually relented. [I didn’t know what this meant, the ‘chosen method’. ]

It was spoken with an amused sense of irony, not racism. Brow furrowed and then raising.

"Yeah, well..." Responded Katherine, deliberating. "I didn't exactly plan to go for a spell of 'tomahawks at dawn', either, y'know?" [Two points. One, her expression amused me. Two, there’s something improper happening w/ the capital R in ‘responded’.]

An observation was muttered from the Medicine Man to Snakes At Feet. Not in English. Too elderly to start learning and too stubborn to see the need. [Nice tough, that last sentence! Very true to the elderly.]

For a moment, the vampire halted movement with the miniature axe in hand. Jaw clenching at the memory of the day she died. The day her father had died. No, more than that. His murder. Retribution didn't so much come, as see a reason to find her. [How did it see a reason to find her?]

Dust in my shoes.

"You could say that, sure."

Dust in my shoes and no way home... [I like this, but I don’t know the reference.]

"Dozen men, give or take. When they couldn't take no more horses, they went up and started... Taking some other things." [Heh... ‘other stuff.’... that amused!]

On the other hand, there was the undeniable feel that this might not be so different to the same task of vengeance she had put herself to, in pursuit of those who had wronged her so badly. [Another clunky sentence. It has far too many words in it.]

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[info]emphasis
2007-03-07 00:19 (link)
The 'chosen method' was reflecting that a vampire had been summoned, as opposed to any old person who would do what is revealed for money. I was going for brevity, but sometimes it doesn't work very well. :)

It was the 'chosen method' in regards to the matter of fighting like with like. In that case, wickedness.

Two, there's something improper happening w/ the capital R in 'responded'.

I know that some people use lower-case, to reflect that it's part of a sentence (in the verbal sense), but it's occurs after at least one full-stop and that forces a capital letter, as it's still the start of a new, in my understanding. :)

You've identified some parts which need clarification and I agree with much! In others, I was going for a more deliberately vague approach. The retribution part was one. It was meant to reflect what's in her profile, in regards to becoming a vampire. Katherine was virtually dead and found salvation in a vampire, without even knowing it. Her first course of action was to get revenge.

Of course, now I see it written that way, I'm kind of at a loss to explain why I thought retribution had a reason to find her! It made sense to me, at the time!

'Dust in my shoes' was actually a sentence which just came to me at the time. I don't know why, just that it was important! I realised that, "Dust in my shoes and no way home," would be perfect for what her internal monologue might have been in the aftermath of the attack which led to her human death. It's just a subtle reference, not really important. :)

And I'm glad the elderly reference hit home with someone!

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[info]eyelinergirls
2007-03-07 09:49 (link)
I know that some people use lower-case, to reflect that it's part of a sentence (in the verbal sense), but it's occurs after at least one full-stop and that forces a capital letter, as it's still the start of a new, in my understanding. :)

I disagree because it makes a sentence fragment out of 'responded katherine...'

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[info]emphasis
2007-03-07 18:22 (link)
I feel the same,, instinctively, but even so, the words trailed off and that leaves it an impossibility to have a single comma there! That's why we often try to end quoted speech with a comma, instead of full stop, to let us do precisely what you say. :)

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My first attempt to comment back had typo!
[info]eyelinergirls
2007-03-08 08:45 (link)
What about like this?

"Yeah, well...," responded Katherine, deliberating. "I didn't exactly plan to go for a spell of 'tomahawks at dawn', either, y'know?"

-or-

"Yeah, well..," responded Katherine, deliberating. "I didn't exactly plan to go for a spell of 'tomahawks at dawn', either, y'know?"

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[info]sinister_darian
2007-03-05 17:20 (link)
"Hey, Tom! Think this one'd be purty if she squealed?"
"Ehh... She's all torn up with them riddle-holes you shot 'er full of. Be like fuckin' a corpse. C'mon, leave 'er be... We got elsewheres t'get to." [Nice touch. I mean it’s cringe-worthy but it drives a point home. Good touch w/ the accent, too.]

Guess who got to be closer to Jesus, assholes... That's right, you did. Easter-style. [Good stuff.]

Because on the whole, Katherine felt nailing what remained of those victims to a cross, in the tried-and-true method of crucifixion, would make for an inventive personal touch, considering her new undead nature. As she rode off, the vultures had already begun to circle. [Would the cross burn her?]

She made at least one of them confess to a rape they had carried out. Made that one fuck a dead porcupine. Then she made the few other survivors do likewise to him, too. Being in the position of meting out poetic justice, Katherine found, could be rather entertaining as a private enterprise. The future would bring with it even more ingenious ways of execution, but Katherine's ability to keep her fun alive was already quite experienced. [It’s ‘eye for an eye’ but somehow I didn’t like reading this part.]

Snakes At Feet came to see the results of such butchery with an uneasy feeling of queasy revulsion. Thus was the agreement, however and he would cry no tears for these men. It was always better for devils to take their own, after all. [I like the wisdom in the last sentence, and the return to an earlier theme about why he summoned her.]

Then again, perhaps making her mark on Las Vegas was almost precisely what was most required now. She had been none too pleased with Jill's recent telephone message and was now seriously considering paying the lawyer a visit, torturing her into a new level of understanding and then giving her fangs for the hell of it. Then maybe use her to find out who had caused all the carnage at Wolfram and Hart and join up with them. [Ha!]

Or perhaps this Blanchard character. A supposed Slayer who worked for the Doughnut Brigade - maybe she'd be worth looking up? [A brigade of nummy treats!]

Rhiannon. [Yeeeahh! *rallying cry* By the way, she would still like to kill Grace for Katherine. Most recently just wasn‘t the time.]

The girl wasn't just a professional, she was a veteran, through and through. There was a difference and the vampiress could see it in the younger brunette's eyes. [Flattering description!]

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[info]emphasis
2007-03-07 00:30 (link)
Hmm, good point! I always put it in the profile and did not consider that! I guess there must have been some way for her to construct some giant crosses. I mean, technically, there's probably a ton of incidental ones in the foundations for houses and stuff. Maybe she just wore gloves or brought some along!

It's 'eye for an eye' but somehow I didn’t like reading this part.

Heh, not meant to! Katherine has always been over in 'camp evil'. Add that to a genuinely burning hatred, plus being personally injured and how her vampiric self detests being made to be seen as weak and it's a recipe for absolute cruelty. That section just touched on her going way overboard when it came to exacting revenge and discovering that she had a talent for it.

She can sometimes be thought of as an anti-hero, but she's definitely evil. Evil and overly sadistic.

That early part of her history was a sort of foundation to show that whole 'waking a sleeping giant' logic. One could say that the vampire edition of her was literally born from an act of cruelty and forged itself in the desire to repay it with an infinite amount of interest.

I forgot I used the term 'Doughnut Brigade'!

Hee!

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[info]eyelinergirls
2007-03-07 09:51 (link)
I would buy it if she wore gloves to protect her hands!

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